Great job using voice to put so much interiority and drama into a coffee shop eavesdropping. The shift change provides natural progression to the narrative. Enjoyed the mood swings.
What a lovely idea to put a Valentine's Day post together for the single people. I distinctly remember being that person (albeit briefly, because let's not kid - I've always been a hoe). Your prose has a lovely natural rythm to it. I shall check out what else is on offer here.
I came to this piece through email.
I don’t really see the feed — I mostly read newsletters and search directly.
Just wanted to note that.
Great job using voice to put so much interiority and drama into a coffee shop eavesdropping. The shift change provides natural progression to the narrative. Enjoyed the mood swings.
What a lovely idea to put a Valentine's Day post together for the single people. I distinctly remember being that person (albeit briefly, because let's not kid - I've always been a hoe). Your prose has a lovely natural rythm to it. I shall check out what else is on offer here.
Why thank you! 😊 I do hope you like what you find.
Really loved the narrative voice of this.
Thank you so much! 😊
Just great. Wry and bittersweet, captures the voice perfectly.
I just melted into this story and let it linger like small sips of a really good coffee...
Super glad you enjoyed! ☺️
I really did!
So beautiful